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Old 03-10-2006, 09:11 PM   #11 (permalink)
a l'amou fou pou tout
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that sounds good to me

you might want to start editing, instead of posting two times in a row
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Old 03-11-2006, 03:30 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Jadix
Ya I'm really not getting my idea across clearly. I wanted this to have a much more constructive and good feeling. Let me try to explain my thinking on the last verse so you guys can help make it clearer.

Then one day I realized there's
Nothing I can change

I meant theres nothing about the past you can change. The point I want to make is that you have to move on, and MAKE a change happen instead of just waiting for it.
Oh okay, see I thought "Nothing I can change" was refering to the next bit in the piece. So "nothing I can change if all I do is hide then". Thats where my thinkning was. It changes perspective when you say it like that insteado f what i was thinking.
She thinks I'm a reclusive genius, she's going to be very disappointed when she finds out i'm a reclusive wanker
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Old 03-11-2006, 04:00 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I like it.
I give props to anyone who can write a song and then post it on mb for all to compliment or criticize.
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