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12-29-2008, 10:55 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Dec 2008
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Killertu's Songwriting Journal
well I'm here to get on a new hobbies as in singging and lyrics writing,I wrote many other parody but this one is my best so far,It a parody of take on me(I don't even know what to call as title for my parody yet)so check out and what u think
 .Dreaming all day Seeing you a magical place Love you everyday Tonight I’m talking all about you Pleasure all day Using hand that all I needed Take it off Get on top Just don’t stop Orgasm Just see you today You hot and all but that who Hard on at you Never gonna get you but can’t do Just say any I know I like it when I’m playing you Up and down Side to side Open wide I’m coming I love you all day Remember you or I can’t say Dream you O.K You just a girl I can play with myself Lying all day You will get your love any day Get it on by myself Light upon Dream to you The song basicaly about a guy dreamming with a girl but he can't get her so he have a me time if u know what I mean(TRUE STORY)
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"Parody is the love of music" Last edited by Killertu; 12-30-2008 at 10:41 AM. |
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12-31-2008, 11:00 PM
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one big soul
Join Date: Feb 2008
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Wifey Boozer would like this.
As for your question, I think it's a decent parody. The masturbation references on the last chorus are well played, but I'm not sure if they would fit in with the music. Better than I could do though.
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01-01-2009, 12:18 PM
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Groupie
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WHat would u mean by fit the music???
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01-01-2009, 06:33 PM
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01-05-2009, 07:23 AM
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Groupie
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Does song needed to make sense???
Well I'm a song writer and I just wrote this beautiful new love song but...here the thing.....I don't think people with less intelligent(no offense
 )know what it mean,even i don't really get it the first time I wrote this but check it out if you knowwhat i'm saying.You,the apple of my eye You,the first love of my sight You,the sould mate in my mind Is only you and only you Who,the one by your side who,will fight for your right who,the love of my eye is only you and only you Is you,to who I come true Is you,that make me the who Is you,and only you To make me,someone for you IT mostly the first sentence,but what u think??? PS:I just update a new part!,is till a draft BTW(I knwo I know...it chessy,the old part are color gray.)
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"Parody is the love of music" Last edited by Killertu; 01-09-2009 at 07:22 AM. Reason: Up date part |
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