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Old 03-19-2009, 08:15 AM   #141 (permalink)
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thank you, but although it is first person it is not my perspective; it is someone i know.
Do I happen to know this person?
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Old 03-19-2009, 06:19 PM   #142 (permalink)
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nope. and its not you. unless it applies. . .? well, if it does than that just means its a good poem; the reader can connect with it
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Old 03-19-2009, 06:36 PM   #143 (permalink)
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i just wrote this an hour ago, and i havent had a chance to edit it or anything yet, but im in a pissy mood and i need to express it in "healthy" ways, or so says my mother. wouldnt want to disobey the tyrant
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more than sibling rivalry

I won't forgive though I may forget
all the **** you've put me through
And it's all out of spite
but I'm spiteful, too
You only see how much I loath you
but you don't see the passion
the underlying fear
But I will never let you see me cry
I dreamed last night about you
A gun to your head
A dagger through your chest
I just want to see you die
I remember big things
and most of the little ones
You chased me with a knife, once
and a board with nails
With your fists always flying
and your face red with rage
Kicking me while I was down
So I have no qualms to do this now
I remember his biased paternal love
because you were just like him
You like the same things
You looked like him, too
And I remember how he always sided with you
How he would send me away
And how you would whisper insults at my back
or bang on my closed door as you walked by
So I have no qualms to do this now
I want to see you dead
I want to see your ****ing disembodied head
and I don't care about the consequences
or about what people say
because all I want is to run away
because what you have done is a knife in my chest
it has scarred me for life
But I will never let you see me cry
I would rather die
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Old 03-19-2009, 08:07 PM   #144 (permalink)
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Oh my god i think im gonna hurl
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Old 03-20-2009, 12:11 PM   #145 (permalink)
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Oh my god i think im gonna hurl
What he said.
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Old 03-21-2009, 08:09 PM   #146 (permalink)
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thank you. with sarcasm
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Old 03-21-2009, 08:18 PM   #147 (permalink)
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Big thank you to the mod who did this.
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Old 04-13-2009, 07:10 PM   #148 (permalink)
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i havent written anything lately, because my life was going all hunky-dory recently. but some things never change
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November

And the asphalt tongues stretching toward forever.
And I don't know where I'm going.
Winter lasts longer
in case you haven't heard.
The slush is sliding around
and around
and the sleet is blocking my view
of the countryside.
And so I'm waiting for the weather to change.
I've spent months waiting for the goddamn seasons to change.
Did ya know
winter lasts longer?
Right now I'm trapped in November.
And I spent the whole goddamn year
waiting for June
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