Wifey Boozer's Songwriting Journal

Wifey Boozer · 12-22-2008, 01:44 PM

Well thank you

The relentless sexual implications goes back to the first paragraph or so

Laces Out Dan! · 12-22-2008, 02:09 PM

I feel the same way as fruitonica. The sexual conotations kinda turned me off of it but it was a fun read. The first half was far better than the second half. But all in all, there were some pretty powerful metaphors in it that I kinda felt as I read. Good job for the most part.

Wifey Boozer · 12-22-2008, 03:50 PM

Thank you

spark10036 · 12-22-2008, 05:36 PM

I wouldn't say I find it fun but it's pretty intriguing. and yes there was room in there for sexual parallels, but u put way too much really. I liked the part with the cigarette as well.

daren/MRI · 12-25-2008, 01:02 PM

Reminds me of William S. Burroughs "Naked Lunch" in some ways. nice work.

Wifey Boozer · 12-25-2008, 03:44 PM

You don't know how much of a compliment you just gave me. In all seriousness. Thank you.

daren/MRI · 12-25-2008, 03:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

You don't know how much of a compliment you just gave me. In all seriousness. Thank you.

no problem was simply the honest truth. it is obvious you have tremendous style and talent. Burroughs was a genius. Books like 'Naked Lunch' and 'Junky' were before their time. your writing has that cutting edge quality. cool & hip in a Ginsberg way too. you must have read all the other great beats it kinda shows in your techniques.

daren/MRI · 12-25-2008, 05:02 PM

Leonard Cohen would love this.

Wifey Boozer · 12-25-2008, 05:51 PM

Bukowski is my favorite... but he didn't like to be considered a "beat". Ginsberg was the man. Burroughs was a genius. All the guys with the candor thing going on have my respect.

Wifey Boozer · 12-25-2008, 05:52 PM

Christ, thank you!

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12-22-2008, 02:09 PM	#72 (permalink)
Laces Out Dan! I love Puck Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,614	I feel the same way as fruitonica. The sexual conotations kinda turned me off of it but it was a fun read. The first half was far better than the second half. But all in all, there were some pretty powerful metaphors in it that I kinda felt as I read. Good job for the most part. __________________ We are entirely smooth, We admit to the truth, We are the best at what we do.

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12-22-2008, 05:36 PM	#74 (permalink)
spark10036 locomotive power Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: too drunk to remember Posts: 518	I wouldn't say I find it fun but it's pretty intriguing. and yes there was room in there for sexual parallels, but u put way too much really. I liked the part with the cigarette as well. __________________ ...siempre es possible

12-25-2008, 01:02 PM	#75 (permalink)
daren/MRI Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Florida Posts: 57	Reminds me of William S. Burroughs "Naked Lunch" in some ways. nice work. __________________ Daren Hear MRI on Mix Radio

12-25-2008, 03:44 PM	#76 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	You don't know how much of a compliment you just gave me. In all seriousness. Thank you. __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

12-25-2008, 05:02 PM	#78 (permalink)
daren/MRI Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Florida Posts: 57	Leonard Cohen would love this. __________________ Daren Hear MRI on Mix Radio

12-25-2008, 05:51 PM	#79 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	Bukowski is my favorite... but he didn't like to be considered a "beat". Ginsberg was the man. Burroughs was a genius. All the guys with the candor thing going on have my respect. __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

12-25-2008, 05:52 PM	#80 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	Christ, thank you! __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]