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Old 01-09-2009, 06:43 PM   #91 (permalink)
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Old 01-10-2009, 08:29 AM   #92 (permalink)
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Old 01-11-2009, 11:20 AM   #93 (permalink)
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Haha .

Where ya been PM buddy?
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Haha .

Where ya been PM buddy?
;p been busy as hell in studio and whatnot...I need to get our EP mastered by the end of January.

Also- check out new MRI music video....see if you recognize anyone about 2/3 into clip ;p

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Old 01-12-2009, 05:07 PM   #95 (permalink)
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Heyyy! That's me there at 2:23 and 2:33! Haha I appreciate that, thanks buddy
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Heyyy! That's me there at 2:23 and 2:33! Haha I appreciate that, thanks buddy
Your parts in video are actually viewers' favorite parts as well!!! YEa!

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Old 01-14-2009, 06:08 PM   #97 (permalink)
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Really? Haha didn't catch that part, that's awesome . The mysterious chick in black and white smoking a cigarette. I like that image.

That's an awesome song, dude. You're going places.
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I wonder why you break up your lines. Does it make your poem longer? No. It confuses me sometimes of how to read the line, or the whole sentence, and I have to reread the stanza to get it. There are no forced rhyme, which I like...you say what you think and your point is delivered well. Fix up your layout and put the lines together as you would say it out loud. It makes something that should flow perfectly too confusing for the reader <<<only my opinion.
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Old 01-16-2009, 05:48 AM   #99 (permalink)
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No. I brake up the lines, so you can get several thoughts out at once. This can be read several ways, one line is one thought, a pause, another thought. Strung together it's a poem. It's how I've read poetry my entire life and sometimes how I speak. Poems are sometimes meant to be read over and over to be "gotten".

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Poems are sometimes meant to be read over and over to be "gotten".
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