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01-05-2009, 08:01 PM | #23 (permalink) |
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.....I don't even know what the song suppose to go,I just wrote randomly and wrote the song out later but that the final draft of that part.......IF u haven't check out my other creation,check this post if u haven't seen it (the site url).com/song-writing-lyrics-poetry/35813-take-me-parody.html
PS:I haven't got 15 post yet...till noobs to site Well what am really meaning is the song is not support with correct past or present tense or other stuff like that,it just needed to sound good....I don't even know what am saying here but u get it???....any one can explain for me???
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01-06-2009, 12:18 AM | #24 (permalink) |
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are you saying she makes you a better person and because she makes you a better person youre worthy of her love? hard to describe but i think i feel what youre saying.
also, if the song makes sense to you then its fine. a lot of songs only make sense to the writers. anyone who disagrees with that is just ignorant. EDIT: after readin some more posts it sounds like youre saying you dont even know hwat it means and you just put something together. if so, then thats stupid |
01-06-2009, 01:13 AM | #25 (permalink) | ||
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a song doesn't 'need' to make sense, but there's a difference between a song that is written to be vague and a song that doesn't make sense because it mangles a language. sorry, no offense intended, but... Quote:
It's you, to whom I become true It's you, that makes me new It's you, and only you Making me someone for you it's not that great but it's not as broken. |
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01-06-2009, 07:20 AM | #27 (permalink) | |
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But well I can't take that seen it wouldn't be my....ahhh....almost type in mind XD well I did but rewrote it XC
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