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01-19-2009, 01:39 AM | #64 (permalink) |
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Well, I guess I'm not very intelligent according to you, because that makes no sense at all. I really hope that you're not pursuing a career as a song writer, because your home will have dirt floors and a tarp as a roof. Completely and utterly terrible. Usually I try to use constructive criticism and would normally say something like, "Well, it's alright, but you should work on _______", but I just can't say that this time around because that has to be the single most terrible thing I've ever read.
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01-24-2009, 03:12 PM | #66 (permalink) |
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well I do like the lyrics of a song or poem to make me think (when i'm in the right mood) and some of this is good but a lot of it is bad grammar and doesn't make sense at all.
incorrect. correct grammar would be: I don't think people with less intelligence know what it means.really bad. i have no idea what this means. maybe: It's you, that makes me the... something incorrect. correct: It's mostly the first sentence, but what do you think? you should try to learn English better before you go and try to write in it. |
01-30-2009, 12:51 PM | #68 (permalink) |
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umm thats a tough one......i think it depends on music or band...i guess i dont know 4 sure.sometimes its good to write the most stupid lyrics ever and turn it into masterpiece (4 example : most of pistols songs never made sense but look at them i mean they r huge ) but if u look it in a way,lets say, rihanna , if u hear umbrella ull probably think its ridiculous. in conclusion i dont think that good lyrics r the key i think its the way u express urself.
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