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Old 02-23-2009, 10:52 AM   #31 (permalink)
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wtf? your FIRST poem and I didn't see it?!!? You ALWAYS show me your poems, even the one that called me a demon!!!!???? again wtf?!
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Old 02-23-2009, 12:24 PM   #32 (permalink)
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Old 02-23-2009, 12:41 PM   #33 (permalink)
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I feel like you are writting about experiancing struggle constantly.
We all do in a way..but I see what you are saying. I think it simply may need some more metaphorical language...there is a lot of feeling already albeit 'depressing'. This might make a good grunge song if executed properly.
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Old 02-23-2009, 02:05 PM   #34 (permalink)
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And to the OP, All I'm going to say is that I have more sympathy for the person the speaker (I'm assuming is you) is yelling at..
I think that would be me because I was being an a**hole to her but I'm not entirely sure.
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Old 02-23-2009, 02:06 PM   #35 (permalink)
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Is this one about your evil bitch parents?
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Old 02-23-2009, 02:09 PM   #37 (permalink)
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I wish you still felt that way
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could someone just put an end to this stuff already
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Old 02-23-2009, 06:08 PM   #39 (permalink)
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could someone just put an end to this stuff already[2]

This is just annoying bullsh*t
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Old 02-23-2009, 06:24 PM   #40 (permalink)
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That's mean
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