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Old 02-25-2009, 06:57 PM   #71 (permalink)
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but. . .i dont wanna die!!!
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Old 02-25-2009, 07:12 PM   #72 (permalink)
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Listen, you two, it really is getting annoying. To me, whatever talent or time you spent on these countless, tedious, seriously getting old, teenage-bleeding heart sob stories that you feel so strongly about as to spam the songwritting forum with, is completely lost. I know your situation and it is not that bad, you don't need to write the same poem/song differently twenty times over to vent, get over yourselfs and go work through your issues via Pm or something.
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Old 02-25-2009, 07:32 PM   #73 (permalink)
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MAybe you should stop writing then....
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Old 02-25-2009, 07:38 PM   #74 (permalink)
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You say my behavior is horrible
My social skills are deplorable
Curse me out for being who I am

You live in a shallow world
Full of shallow people
with many masks to wear

When I don't talk I have nothing to say
Why are you against keeping it that way?
You curse me out for being who I am

You live in a world of pretty people
When somewhere in them is the groaning mass
of who they are in truth

You say I act different when I'm around you
That's because you and me are through
I don't want to be your daughter anymore

Disown me, why don't you?
No, wait, but what would people say?
Gossip and talk is a trivial thing

You want me to be a perfect daughter
a poster child for your maternal slaughter
Where I go you cannot follow

Who I am is someone you don't know
Where I go at night is somewhere you cannot follow
Into my dreams, or something more?

You curse me out for being who I am
But I cannot live in your lifelong sham
I'll escape the moment I turn eighteen

Let me free from this genetic
hold you keep on my life
Let me learn from my own mistakes

A sheltered child goes nowhere in this
cold, dark world
of empty people

You have the nerve to say I, I am two-faced
And that the faces are not pretty
At least they are real and not wrought of Botox and Plastic Surgery

I don't love you
In fact, I don't even LIKE you
In fact, I can barely STAND you

But this is just who I am
Deal with it
You're the one who made me
good drop.
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:21 AM   #75 (permalink)
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What IS tangible is the springtime sun
Your lips upon my neck
Your fingers resting in my hand
the gentle caress is soft and pleasing
I still LOVE this stanza haha.
I the song is fine the way it is overall though.
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:32 AM   #76 (permalink)
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I hope you're both in your younger teens.
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:39 AM   #77 (permalink)
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uh... yeah.
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:43 AM   #78 (permalink)
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I want to know what ****ing poetry you people read.

Name your two favorite poems.
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:45 AM   #79 (permalink)
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None unless I'm forced to.
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:47 AM   #80 (permalink)
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Why do you write it then?
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