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12-02-2009, 05:58 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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primo's Songwriting Thread
I've never really written a full song; I think I hold back a lot of the time, as while I write I think my lyrics sounds corny.
But here's the first verse and chorus that i've written... Honest constructive criticism is greaty valued! I'm so empty, while full of entropy Just drownin in a pool of self-pity It's my new state of consciousness Leaking of what my life's missing Well, have I lost everybody? Nobody reaches out Looks like it's time to close the doors again Chorus I never really stopped waiting for things to begin changing I've always known, i'm the one so what keeps me waiting? I've gotta do something before this train's derailing |
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